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Beyond another world's torture

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Yes it's done!

So this is the cover for beyond another world's torture. this story maybe go though nuity bloody muders and many other violent events so don't read it if you got a problem.

Yes this is the cover to a manga check it out!

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storyline by me ©
most character by me ©
Jackel owned by Blizzard Nightraid Xenia ©

Do not steal any one the art or stoyline. may draw the character with my permission!
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Nice job on the grass and the poses. The guy's hand looks really good, too. :D
The shading could be improved, however. The way you have it along the outlines, (I've heard it called Pillow Shading, since that's sort of what it makes the image look like when you think about it in 3D) is incorrect. Use a light source to be able to tell where shadows go, it'll really help get even more mood into the picture, depending on where it is and how strong.
I also really like the sky, how the blue is faded into it. It may be a good idea to fade the green of the grass (which looks really good, by the way) and the girl's shirt & shoes, so they aren't quite so distracting and go more with the grey look. The 'Sketch Book' is also sort of distracting. It doesn't look like it's actually on the sketchbook, more like it's labeled over the picture, but getting words like that is hard and annoying.
I love the writing on the stone, as well. The way the end streaks down is awesome~ :D